In the garden with the shoe..

Once there was a garden
With a giant shoe.
And in that place a boy kissed a girl,
And the girl liked it
So she kissed him back

And their love grew strong.
Time goes by and then
The boy and the girl return
To the garden with the giant shoe
And they kissed again
More briefly this time
But with even more love in their hearts.
And on this visit they numbered three
The boy and the girl
And a small golden haired child
Who played in the shoe
Β while his parents remembered
how his journey to existence began.

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14 Comments

  1. Claire Toplis
    May 6, 2013 / 5:10 pm

    Beautiful
    I love poetry

    • Sonya Cisco
      May 7, 2013 / 6:29 am

      Thank you you, me too!

  2. May 6, 2013 / 7:54 pm

    Oh, that is so so sweet! πŸ™‚

    • Sonya Cisco
      May 7, 2013 / 6:30 am

      Thank you, it is very out of character for me to be sweet, but even I manage it sometimes! πŸ™‚

  3. May 6, 2013 / 7:55 pm

    I don’t think that’s crap at all. I think it’s very lovely and tells a story πŸ™‚

    • Sonya Cisco
      May 7, 2013 / 6:31 am

      Thank you, I am not used to being soppy!

  4. sabrina montagnoli
    May 6, 2013 / 8:09 pm

    What a lovely little poem! It’s nice to have memories like this!

    • Sonya Cisco
      May 7, 2013 / 6:31 am

      Isn’t it, nice to remember the early days, before kids steal all the romantic time! πŸ™‚

  5. Nicola Thomas
    May 7, 2013 / 6:02 am

    That is beautiful

    • Sonya Cisco
      May 7, 2013 / 6:32 am

      Thanks πŸ™‚

  6. Becky Goddard-Hill
    May 7, 2013 / 8:28 am

    I love this! Pop it in your little ones keepskae box they will love to show it their grandkids

    • Sonya Cisco
      May 7, 2013 / 8:59 am

      thats a nice idea x

  7. Older Mum
    May 7, 2013 / 11:54 am

    That was lovely, and it really told a story and one that came full circle. X.

  8. Distressed Housewife
    May 7, 2013 / 3:16 pm

    Lovely, my sort of poetry. Sweet and touching but not cheesy or cringe-worthy, a balance that I can never seem to find! πŸ™‚

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